He Saved a Woman in the Snow—Then Faced the Men Hunting Her
PART 2: …and I entered.
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I was certain that someone in the corridor would hear my heartbeat because it was so loud. There was something off about the air in the room.
Still too much. Too quiet. Silence that waits instead of the type that comes after death.
“Grace?” I muttered.
No response.
With shaking hands, I approached the bed and grabbed the sheet. My gut told me to stop, but I was unable to do so.
I withdrew it.
And I stopped breathing.
She was the one.
My daughter’s face was pale, still, and her lips were slightly open. However, something wasn’t right. Not the silence. Not the hue.
Her hand.
It was warm.
I froze.
No.
No, that was not feasible.
I touched her wrist with my fingertips. looking. offering up prayers.
After that—
a pulse.
faint.
However, there.
My knees almost buckled.
“She is still alive.” My voice broke as I whispered. “Grace, I’m here, baby.”
She fluttered her eyelids.
Just barely.
But enough.
My vision was filled with tears.
I heard it at that point.
Steps.
Quick.
It is urgent.
The door opened.
“Stop!” a voice yelled.
I pivoted.
A nurse stood there, her eyes wide with fear rather than rage.
She hurriedly said, “You’re not supposed to be here,” before entering and closing the door. “You must go. Right now.
“She’s alive!” I said. “You claimed she had passed away! He informed me—
The nurse interrupted, dropping her voice, “I know what he told you.” “And you must listen to me if you don’t want her to truly die.”
My entire being became icy.
“What are you discussing?”
The nurse looked from me to the corridor and back again.
She stated, “They’re not supposed to know she survived.” “Not just yet.”
“Who are ‘they’?”
Before she could respond—
From down the corridor came the sound of another voice.
Ezekiel.
“Have you seen anyone enter?”
My blood froze.
The nurse took hold of my arm.
“Hide. Right now.”
Just as the door opened once more, she shoved me under the curtain.
Ezekiel entered.
However, he wasn’t by himself.
He was followed by two men dressed in dark suits.
not medical professionals.
not employees.
There was something off about them.
under control.
observing.
“Is everything alright?” While looking around the room, one of them quietly enquired.
The nurse gave a hasty nod. “Regular inspection.”
The bed caught Ezekiel’s attention.
Then, carefully, go around the room.
I refrained from breathing.
I could see his sneakers through the curtain.
Nearer.
Nearer.
Then he came to a halt.
directly in front of my hiding place.
Nobody moved for a moment.
Then he said something.
Low.
Tight.
“She was present.”
My heart fell.
The suit-wearing man cocked his head. “Who?”
Ezekiel took a while to respond.
Next—
“My mother-in-law.”
Quiet.
heavy.
risky.
The second man moved to the front.
“Look for her.”
My hands were trembling wildly under the veil.
Grace was still alive.
And whatever this was…
A terrible birth was never the point.
It was a far worse thing.
And right now…
They were aware of my presence.
“Your daughter didn’t survive the delivery,” my son-in-law sobbed over the phone. He grabbed my shoulders, barred my way, and said, “You don’t want to see her like this,” as I hurried to Mercy General Hospital and attempted to enter room 212. Believe me.
Then I noticed something worse than sorrow in his eyes: terror. It dawned on me that night that they were concealing the truth from me rather than only saying farewell.
It wasn’t until my son-in-law informed me that my daughter had passed away that I realised they were lying to me.
It happened when he prevented me from seeing her.
I’m 59 years old, and my name is Bernice. That Friday afternoon, I was preparing rice pudding in my Charleston kitchen when the phone rang.
My son-in-law’s name, Ezekiel, showed up on the screen. Grace was 37 weeks pregnant. I had been waiting for the call announcing the birth of my first grandson for days as I slept with my heart pounding.
However, I heard something different.
A gasp. Weeping desperately. Then, before I could fully comprehend it, I heard a sentence that broke my heart:
“Visit the hospital. Right now.
I failed to properly switch off the cooker. I didn’t properly lock the door. I can’t even recall how I arrived at the car.
All I know is that I gripped the steering wheel as if I could hold my kid from a distance while driving to Mercy General, praying at every red light.
Ezekiel was sitting on a grey chair, leaning forward, his face drenched in tears and his white shirt dishevelled, as I walked into the emergency room.
When he spotted me, he got up. His eyes were puffy and red, but he was experiencing more than simply facial agony.
Something else was present.
Something I was unable to identify at the time.
He grabbed me by the shoulders and said, “Bernice.” “Your daughter did not make it through the delivery.”
I sensed a movement in the floor.
I recall declining. I recall telling Grace again that I had spoken to her that morning, that she was okay, that her contractions were only moderate, and that this couldn’t be happening.
I recall attempting to sprint in the direction of the corridor.
Above all, I recall that he stopped me.
Not by using force. The worst thing was that.
He looked me in the eyes, grasped me with enough strength to slow me down, and spoke softly, almost pleadingly:
“This is not how you want to view her. Believe me.
You never forget certain phrases.
One of them was that.
Because a mother can tell when something is damaged and when it is being concealed.
I enquired about my grandchild. He shook his head, looking down. He claimed that he had also failed to survive. My knees buckled.
He sat me down, spoke to me as though he wanted to keep me safe, and reiterated that it was preferable for me to remember Grace as lovely, laughing, and alive—not “like this.”
However, I was unable to take my eyes off of him.
Why were they afraid if he had really recently lost the lady he loved?
Why the haste to prevent me from coming in?
Why didn’t he allow me to approach him for even a brief moment?
I was able to glean one detail—room 212—through my tears.
All my instinct needed to hold on to me all night was that.
Like a ghost, I returned home. It had burnt in the pot. The fragrance of smoke and milk filled the kitchen. The door remained open.
I tried to breathe while I sat in the dark living room, but my mind kept going back to the same scene: his hands on my shoulders, his voice pleading for my confidence, that weird dread throbbing in his eyes.
Then, with a grief I didn’t want to comprehend at the time, I recalled what Grace had asked me days earlier while caressing her stomach in her living room.
“Mom… Do you think you ever allowed me to be who I am?
That night, that sentence came back to me like a knife.
I was still sitting in the dark, watching the clock, at 11:30 p.m. I was already wearing a dark jumper, black trousers and my car keys at 11:55 p.m.
I was going to stop crying.
I was returning.
A nurse showed me a service corridor where supplies were brought in and they went outside to smoke during early morning shifts when my cousin was in the hospital five years ago. No one ever locked that door.
I could still recall it.
I parked three blocks away, moved in close proximity to the tree shadows, and silently circled the structure.
At night, the hospital was a different place with half-darkened windows, deserted hallways, chilly lighting, and the sound of my footsteps reverberating off white walls.
I ascended the service stairs.
The second level.
North corridor.
212th room.
The room was just in front of the nurses’ station. Hiding, I waited till one went for coffee and the other left for a call. I then proceeded. The door was open.
There was not a single light on inside.
The only thing that leaked in was the filthy brightness from the hallway.
I noticed the bed. I noticed that the monitors were off. Under the sheets, I noticed a form.
The Men Who Shouldn’t Be in Part Three
Gideon did not hold off.
He stepped outside and silently closed the cabin door behind him as soon as he heard the motors clearly.
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The chill was so intense that it might split a thought in two.
Excellent.
That was what he needed.
Everything had to be made plain.
concentrated.
Easy.
Either kill or die.
The east ridge was the source of the sound.
engines that are low. throttle control.
not residents.
not hunters.
These men had no idea where they were heading.
They were aware.
Gideon was quick.
Using elevation as a shield, he made a broad loop and ascended above his own cabin. His footsteps were swallowed by snow. His smell was swept away by the wind.
When the first men appeared—
He was already superior to them.
Three snowmobiles.
Each has two riders.
Six males.
Too tidy.
Too well-organised.
Too quiet.
soldiers.
Fifty yards from the cabin, they came to a stop.
The engines cut.
Once more, silence.
One of them moved to the front.
tall.
a dark coat.
The scarf and goggles conceal the face.
However, the way he stood—
command.
Gideon sensed it right away.
This wasn’t your average hired man.
This was an order-giver.
One of the others remarked, “Cabin’s warm.”
Another said, “She’s here.”
The leader remained silent.
He merely held up one hand a little.
The others dispersed.
Expert.
disciplined.
No movement wasted.
Gideon let out a slow breath.
measured the distance.
direction of the wind.
angles.
Next—
He fired the shot.
The Initial Shot
The silence was broken by the fracture.
In an instant, the man on the left fell.
Not a scream.
Simply vanished.
The others responded quickly.
For civilians, it is too quick.
They fanned out, rolled, and dove.
Weapons are released in a matter of seconds.
Immediately, there was return fire.
Gideon was surrounded by a blast of snow.
He shifted.
didn’t remain to witness the hit.
didn’t stay to take in the picture.
He moved ten yards to the right, hid behind some rocks, and fired once more.
The second man is down.
They were aware now.
Not only where he was—
but who he was.
not a victim.
The Change in the Battle
“Flank him!” exclaimed one.
There are two split left.
One correct.
The leader did not move.
observing.
constantly observing.
Gideon saw.
I filed it aside.
He went downhill, dropping low.
Quick.
Quiet.
invisible.
The soldiers on either side of him believed they were getting closer.
They weren’t.
They were entering it.
He approached the person on the right from behind.
It was close enough to hear his breathing.
The man pivoted—
It’s too late.
Gideon’s blade was already in motion.
Fast.
Exact.
Quiet.
There was no sound as the body dropped into the snow.
There are three remaining.
Within the Cabin
Elena sat up straight inside.
Though something else had taken over, the fever was still burning in her veins.
lucidity.
chilly.
sharp.
The shots were audible to her.
They were counted.
measured the spaces.
Don’t panic.
Plan of action.
She grabbed the weapon that Gideon had abandoned.
I looked it over.
loaded.
She then went to the rear wall.
and tugged a floorboard loose.
Below—
One more secret compartment.
Inside—
greater than paper.
a drive.
encrypted.
sealed.
The empire of her father—
diminished to a hand-sized object.
The Second Wave
Outside—
The rest of the men reorganised.
One said, “He’s trained.”
Another said, “Not just trained.” “Military.”
At last, the leader spoke.
“Hayes.”
The name pierced the atmosphere.
Gideon froze.
For a split second only.
Enough.
There was a gunshot.
closer than previously.
His shoulder was ripped apart by the bullet.
He fell.
rolled.
disappeared beyond the ridge.
In the snow, blood spread quickly.
cosy.
Vibrant.
risky.
The Name You Shouldn’t Know
With his jaws clenched, Gideon applied pressure to the wound.
They were aware of his name.
That implied—
It wasn’t just about her.
He was the subject of this.
The Truth Shows Up
The leader yelled quietly, “Come out, Hayes.”
“This doesn’t need to get worse.”
Gideon remained silent.
“You believe this has to do with the girl?”
A pause.
“It’s not.”
Gideon began to breathe more slowly.
concentrated.
“You were involved in something that didn’t end well ten years ago,” the man went on.
The past was like a hammer.
heat from the desert.
Firearms.
smoke.
A man was abandoned.
Dead.
Or so he believed.
The speaker went on, “You recall Montalvo’s extraction?”
Gideon’s blood froze.
The man responded, “You were supposed to die there.”
Quiet.
Next—
“I didn’t.”
The leader moved to the front.
He took off his goggles.
Gideon noticed his face as well.
The dude in the picture.
The man he abandoned.
alive.
The Turn
Gideon declared, “You’re dead.”
The man grinned.
“No,” he replied coolly.
“I simply switched sides.”
The Last Realisation Inside the Cabin
Everything was heard by Elena.
Every single syllable.
All names.
And lastly—
She comprehended.
She wasn’t just saved by Gideon.
He was already involved in the conflict she had fled.
The Line That Makes Everything Different
Outside—
The man lifted his weapon.
He said, “Bring me the girl.”
Gideon got to his feet.
hurt.
bleeding.
but still upright.
“No.”
More forcefully than a gunshot, the word struck the snow.
FINAL HOOK (SETUP FOR PART 4)
The wind began to pick up once more.
It started to snow.
And for the first time since the altercation began—
Both sides came to the same realisation.
This was more than a rescue.
This was more than a pursuit.
Something that began ten years ago came to an end.
And only one of them managed to escape that mountain unharmed.
